for this final post i would like to make it all about how the government can actually Music to improve the environment by introducing low prices for music schools and the learning of music,just by doing that we will get the oportunity for everyone to learn music, because its not everyone who can afford that much money to attend some schools, by a percentage of 34% of people that graduate form music schools and become proffesionals are people who could afford it but that could be avoided if the price was brought down and ofcourse it's not everyone that appreciates music and there might be consequences but there is more chances and it doesnt have to be only that 34% only, and all the kids (which need to be introduced to music as soon as possible) will have that amazing opportunity to learn even if their parents exactly afford it and thats gonna improve the next people of genearation that will run our contries and make it a better place than this.
Friday, January 22, 2016
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for this final post i would like to make it all about how the government can actually Music to improve the environment by introducing low prices for music schools and the learning of music,just by doing that we will get the oportunity for everyone to learn music, because its not everyone who can afford that much money to attend some schools, by a percentage of 34% of people that graduate form music schools and become proffesionals are people who could afford it but that could be avoided if the price was brought down and ofcourse it's not everyone that appreciates music and there might be consequences but there is more chances and it doesnt have to be only that 34% only, and all the kids (which need to be introduced to music as soon as possible) will have that amazing opportunity to learn even if their parents exactly afford it and thats gonna improve the next people of genearation that will run our contries and make it a better place than this.
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Very passionate blog about a topic your clearly love. It’s always fun to read when someone is so taken by their subject. Good work.
ReplyDeleteA few issues :
- Spelling/ grammar issues (ex. run-ons, thats , capitalization, carrer, alot, im, peolple, etc.)
- A touch vague / rambling at times. (ex. Big picture post)
- Some posts under the 200 word minimum (ex. Social)
- Unclear where some of your sourcing comes from, (ex. 34%). (If you don’t tell us where you got your info, it can be considered plagiarism.)